Related to the 'fool' part, can't impress everyone when you think outside the box.
after the first four lines I felt you really picked up steam
this is different from the other piece you dropped which I put mytwist on 'cause it seemed fun
I think what really stuck out for me was how you wrote it out
It reads different from other pieces and has a certain idk mystique to it
Either way nice work here breh
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