lol this had its moments. ups and downs. could definitely pass on the multiple rape references hahaha. im pretty sure even though this is fairly dense that u wrote it pretty quickly. its was aight. you probly would think i would love this but i didn't.. hmm not even sure exactly why. yes it rhymed alot but like.. the scheming i think was actually SUPER simple. like the vocab was kinda ehhh. actually just remembering now that's the title. you could tell u weren't putting much into this. i've seen better from u fox! def had some cool parts though. just wasn't all there for me as a whole. peep mine and tell me what u think brahseph
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