[Hush]

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

What's up wi saying 14/16 and posting 10, you run out of concepts?

Tried to be cool here like fuck RB, but we know he had no options
Turned his back on his own,n just got flashbacks of his mom giving him up for adoption
lol nice. setup and punch meshed well. great way to start a verse
Girls'll never pick him first cuz he looks retarded that's a FACT
if a girl choose to go phish the unlucky bitch lost when she pulled this joker from the pack
eh, I like the angle u attempted but too many things I dont like. phish is a half nameplay, its retarded imho. some ppl like it I dont.. plus. if u want to be literal pulling a joker from the deck is usually a good thing.. u didnt sell the line enough for me
U & ya sister disgusting & dirty, wi u girls need mad protections
Just cuz U look Inbred doesn't give ya the excuse to be handing out yeast infections
decent. it felt clunky in how it was worded and came across a bit cumbersome for no reason, but the general idea was cool
This computer nerd can act dope but we look thru him & see he wack
phishin top tier, only if he hacked knucks account n used it to change his battle stats
yea I get it, but no. same as last time if not alil worst
Throw lefts n rights that ain't nice, I'll easily defend them geek
I'll be catching z's, wrist n make him repeatingly punch HIMSELF to sleep
this is better... dunno why u wanted to nameplay so much, the line isnt great but it seemed alot better by comparison to the last few
Done

Originally Posted by Zelphish

Lot a hero? nah he aint shit when ive got the blade to his chin
im such a Joker.. the way my knife can turn a slight Smirk to a grin
this is pretty good. I dig it, nice opener. setup worked. all in all this is above avg to good
& ya chicks bad Jim, sure. been in the slammer a couple times, but hey..
guess u werent Biggs enuf, cuz no matter hw much u Piper she'll always b gay
I dont get this. wording seemed fucked. iunno just a miss to me
im a slugger, no horse play but a few run arounds n u'll get left in the dirt
just 1 combo'll send u to the dentist.. u'll see a Triple Crown when he smirks
nah. the connection is too vague. it dont work. I see the angle but shit fell flat
Zelph's handy with the 9, watch me put em in his place
only time he'll ever CZ.. is when i have one pointed at his face
eh, its lazy and wack
cash for days homie, best believe its a win when i play
cuz wen i have the .25 sent to a Lotto, uono if ima scratch em off or blow em away

concept good. wp was almost good. but u had too many moving parts here and u didnt mesh em well. felt rushed

vote for lotto

slim margin, pretty competitive battle