Air Force One shit, bullet’s will kill the president.
It’ll be a World War.. too, when I tell you “Para,troopers surround your residence..”
^the .. before too threw me off tbh. the connections are there tho. decent
If he claims he works a set, he’s done or deceased,
What an actor, because the only set he step on is the one for Grease..
^not a bad idea. but then u said set twice, and the wp itself is kinda played.
I wouldn’t be surprised if he lived in a mobile home basement,
Because the only time this clown Para,shoots is when he’s overdosing on vacation..
^unlike ur opener, this is missing a connection. parachutes is there kinda just for the wp
Not to get too scientific, I still got the blasta’s on,
But one jab’ll have my opponent Paradigm Shift.. like he put 3-D glasses on..
^cool. the paradigm shift part was nice. connection cud'a been stronger than 3d glasses, but this was still cool
I’ll bring him to a venue, let him rap n get sweaty, slow
Hit em with the hawk, n we’ll see P all over the crowd like an R Kelly show..
^p/pee is rly old & also kinda lazy
I consider myself honorable, but i’m hurried to leave ‘em depraved,
The only time you see Par-ley… is when he’s buried deep in the grave..
^if we wanna nitpick this doesnt work like bore np's on neighbor, but idk. this wasn't bad
Named my new pistols UPS, unstoppable revolvers,
The bullets fly land, air, water.. slogan for em is “United Problem Solvers..”
^not bad
vs.
Get Al Sharp'd In here, it's civil rights news actually
the way they left you unarmed I might get blamed for police brutality
^ehh. concept was def there, but the flip was lazy, w/ the wp in the setup & everything
Might've wrote his best now watch'em choke to death
this Dub locked down better than the defense of Dellavedova Steph
^oookay. kinda statementish
Styles been awk, beaten till those rhymes end, stop
& leave a Redder Ric Flair screaming with out the knifes edge chop (WOO!)
^not bad
Dragonglass left behind, scars on both of his wrists
that HardHome lifes coming back to haunt you not John Snow on his ship
^word. cool
Guns im shootin put smog over ya city, make a quake sound
the barrels you hold dwarfs in comparison & are smuggled into Lake Town
^this was dope tbh
NC Veteran, Longbar Legend so you know he's gonna die
Every punch leaves Rhet In A fucked up situation, worse than Beyonds Eye
^yup, solid
Perform dark rituals in a black mask wit a massive cup
Your serious Issues with Magic need to be addressed... NOT the ones bought off Bags & Hush
^this was a lazy connection lmao. but decent line
rhet has all the ideas. if he can work them into stronger punches by flipping them better, i can see him elevating fast. like paradigm shift was dope wp. if u had had a slightly better connection, that woulda been lotb. para got lazy, but he still had some dope concepts. the got & hobbit lines were pretty fire tbh. & that won him the battle. he just had the hardest quotes. but like i said, rhet doesn't need to adjust much to become rly good. so props to both.
v/para
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