Yea this battle was pretty close, I don't know who would think otherwise
in fact I really enjoyed this battle for the clash of styles..
V, I enjoyed the structure of your verse & your capability of switching your style
this is very different from your style in the first round which I also enjoyed
you grasp onto a more refined aspect of writing that most people choose to ignore.
based on your 'boarding' agenda the love for your style goes unnoticed imo..
but I seen you drop some gems here & there, and this was on that same tier
I am going to have to agree with Pharaoh on that line though, that seemed fillerish
otherwise your verse was well rounded my friend, and has an intriguing aspect on your topic...
nice work breh...
sraL, You are an impressive writer when you aren't trolling for 9 years
I really enjoy your ability to draw such inspiration from the topic here
you really shine when it comes to topicals too, really smooth structure
the flow of the piece was consistent and easily captures the idea you presented
needless to say you had the more fleshed out version as apposed to V's piece
nice work either way...
V/I enjoyed the effort that both writers put into this battle
both come from different sides of the battlefield and have skills
great execution from both sides...sorry my vote isn't up to par
got things to do children...anyway my vote goes to the gangster of gully
the paladin of putrid....Lars
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