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Old 06-12-2015, 11:42 PM   #11
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Originally Posted by Wanderer View Post
Holy shit I checked, realising you bout 50+ ain't take me a sec
my Grandfather'd Clock your whole style & I hope one falls on you, breaking your neck
Clock/Clocked has been done a lot... the connection here also falls short with the breaking of neck... too wordy maybe
Lookin' as if ya lost, stare tellin 1000 words. Honest, stop
Can't tell if you missin a good Old Timer just wondering where you left ya pocket watch
weak and concept is missing something
Probs a dead beat at ya job & creep out all the other low earners
before dude finishes a Shifty woulda been labelled that by his co-workers
classic NC style... doesnt really work both ways though so its not great. Tap into writing more punches like this yo
The fact there's a wedding ring on ya finger is something we can't dispute
but I bet nobody could tell if she was decent Tailor you & her were a quality Suit
i dont get this tbh lol... concept sucks
& you obvs doubt ya girl. amount of time she deceives you ain't really good
but did the chick really need to go THAT far to prove she was on her period
doesnt rhyme lol... concept connection needs work but in the right direction
Girls adore me, you see the exuberance I got going on?
If Eternal females heads it's cos they're thinking his stare gonna last that long
ehhh kind of a reach but again write more like this
Jesus man get ghost, before you do though I'll raise a toast
to the hair-line that goes back further than lists of times you've cried over votes
to basic

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Originally Posted by Destroyer View Post


damn dog! u hangin w/ TWO chicks??!?!? you're leaving des so inspired...
the one on the left stands out a little more tho, not the blonde, I mean the brunette's central incisor
im to lazy to google what that means
how you like 20 years younger than me and have more wrinkles than I do?
I mean the lines on your forehead be stretching out longer than the one that's behind you
Cool, too obvious though
nothin cud make those bitches sleep w/you, & I know u hoping that beer will
& des is bout to leave u In Bruises, since u walking around lookin like Colin 'Feral'
no lol just no
you know u gonna get smacked right? Soon as they see u live a fag life...
that ain't a flower print, it's a splatter pattern of semen & ur standing under a black light
rofl, good
I heard wanderer bangs, I didn't know they was talking about ur mop head
how the fuck u gonna have a combover when you're not even going bald yet?
LOL funny
I got great flips, but I also got snake grips...
I'm leaving u with six dots... I don't mean the ones reflecting in ur shades bitch
a better setup wouldve made this cool
dog u must be mad if u think u looking fly with that dead skin...
I haven't seen such a crusty stache... since bags posted pics of his comic card collection
lol good
Pic battles are kinda zzzzzz. im not a fan but anyways... Crusty stache and blacklight were enough to take this wanderer shows promise with a few lines and this is the first time im reading stuff from him. Wasnt destroyers best pic battle but along with those two he had 1 or 2 other funny lines.

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