Best/More effective bars:
My first pic battle & i'm using you to get these rocks off squirt
I'll have Bur buried so bad it'd look worse than that cheap knock off shirt
- Tough, I fucks w/ it...
We used to be cool we had peeps loathin how the clips just keep smokin
But I see bro that you were nothing but a bitch in sheep's clothing
- Dope pic reference. Could have used a better set up, IMO.
You was broke and a stan I gave u confidence now I'm showing you cans
Cause these arms go over the shoulder, while that's just how u pose with ur man
- Don't really see an arm over his shoulder, had there been, it would have been a dope flip/picture reference/gun bar.
Bars that had potential but fell flat, IMO:
You the one with the goons!? I should beat ur ass at that bar cause u lied
Look even your shadow only has your back part of the time
- I think this had potnetial. Execution, IMO was kind of mild, tho.
Throw up them hands, you know in reality you'd drop so do not fight
Button his dreams... i'd hope to god he'd do that to his top right
- Same as last bar, execution a little off/mild.
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Best/More effective bars:
This is the lesbian y'all clamour for!? NC's own Mr. Man of War...
He's a Square Peg ina Round Hole. & so is the Fake Earring this faggot wore
- This was pretty cool picture reference.
U ain't a soldier Sho. Justa frail boy with NO hope in votes.
Shittt even Orc is Blacker Denim, & we ain't talkin' bout our chosen Coats
- Lol, again... Dope picture reference and solid flip on it.
He takes pics w/ blunts to shock kids here. &&god, it's queer
mannn quit Blowing Smoke -- u do that every time u say you're not Midtier
- Dope picture reference. Tough bar here & I fucks w/ this. LOTB, IMO.
Ur folks told u bout Employment & now u tryna find shit
But they said Keep an Ear out for Cash. not get a Tatt of the Sign beside it
- This was slick & a dope picture reference.
Bars that had potential but fell flat, IMO:
Damnnn boy. The ink you got is some stupid dumb shit
Ironic u screaming 'Zip Em Up!!' & it's all u hear w/ THOSE tattoos in public
- Didn't really consider this an insult, could have been a little harsher w/ it.
U Lime to the death. & I fuck w/ Ron of War, that guy is a vet!
.. it's just reaaaally fucking creepy u got Gods Child on the side of ya neck.
- Same as above.
Looking like Taylor Gang & actin' the knowitall are feats of his
But trusttt that Khalifa man dead in seconds just for thinkin' that he a Wiz
- Cal leave a man dead? No wayyyyy. Forced as fuck, IMO.
OVERALL: Pretty solid picture battle, ladies. I think both these niggas did well, here. Murda, for a 1st picture battle, not bad man. But all in all, IMO - Orc takes this. He referenced the picture a lot better and basically did so with ever bar he dropped. Had some bangers, as well. Murda had some bangers, but also had some bars I didn't like as were, Orc's entire verse was pretty much nice even tho he started off slow, but closed out with some fire. Even his potential bars were dope picture references, but he slipped up on executing them. Blowing smoke bar was dope and LOTB for me... Murda's arm over the shoulder bar was dope, had there been an arm over Orc's shoulder. IDK if it's the work desktop but I don't see an arm over his shoulder, so that was just a regular gun bar for me. With that being said...
Orc got it
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