Netcees - View Single Post - R. 2: dead man vs. Razah

Geno · 06-11-2015, 09:57 AM

Fire battle.
Reserved for initital vote

Just left the lars veritas thread.. was the best up until this so far.

Deadman.. you brought that swag you always bring. Rapid rlfire syllable usage that perhaps no one appreciates more than i in a persons writing. I have to complain content wise though this week brother.. i felt like you may have been writing this with other things on your mind and didnt quite capture it how you would have liked to? Perhaps.. anyway.
Started really strong verybtypical of a black verse and then somewhere in the middle i lost interest for some reason.. it just seamed to rakble off topic and lose me.. and then suddenly.. it hopped righg back on track. ended strong and was dope as hell fromthe chsndeliers in open sky on down.. but it strayed and thats gonna hurt

Razah..
Your up ahainst probably the best person technically that i know.
Yet.. you told a dope tale and had very decent syllable usage and smooth reading tobthe point that i honestly believe you edged black this week. Its a rare daybthat i bet against him.. and i honestly expected a blowout. But you suprised me here.. well done. You didnt close as strong as i would have liked and seemed to get a bit draoned conceptually.. but it held me and ibthought it was a bit more solid than blackbthis week.

Excellent battle
I hev to vote against my favorite to win this event..
And go with..
V/razah.. to my surprise.

Respect to both

06-11-2015, 09:57 AM	#7
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Fire battle. Reserved for initital vote Just left the lars veritas thread.. was the best up until this so far. Deadman.. you brought that swag you always bring. Rapid rlfire syllable usage that perhaps no one appreciates more than i in a persons writing. I have to complain content wise though this week brother.. i felt like you may have been writing this with other things on your mind and didnt quite capture it how you would have liked to? Perhaps.. anyway. Started really strong verybtypical of a black verse and then somewhere in the middle i lost interest for some reason.. it just seamed to rakble off topic and lose me.. and then suddenly.. it hopped righg back on track. ended strong and was dope as hell fromthe chsndeliers in open sky on down.. but it strayed and thats gonna hurt Razah.. Your up ahainst probably the best person technically that i know. Yet.. you told a dope tale and had very decent syllable usage and smooth reading tobthe point that i honestly believe you edged black this week. Its a rare daybthat i bet against him.. and i honestly expected a blowout. But you suprised me here.. well done. You didnt close as strong as i would have liked and seemed to get a bit draoned conceptually.. but it held me and ibthought it was a bit more solid than blackbthis week. Excellent battle I hev to vote against my favorite to win this event.. And go with.. V/razah.. to my surprise. Respect to both __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est* Last edited by Geno; 06-12-2015 at 07:01 PM.