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Old 06-11-2015, 03:46 AM   #6
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Originally Posted by Baldo the Beta View Post
@ill nik-A you're about as Cuba as Cuba Gooding Jr. nigga

I'm Alpha, and Alf is who you look like pal
MJ made Man in the Mirror...and that's enough to make you go look right now
nah
you're nothing but net, you fake baller, there's proof if you're in doubt
the last game of 21 this old fat man played had him losing to the house
what?
we can go back n forth but guard your points! before blickies blam at you
cuz it'll get ugly playa, when shells hit that Astro and fuckup Nik's van axel
dont think I'm following but this can't be good
only think you Scarface cause you're a Cuban with acne
I got dope lines for days
you couldn't blow up a strip if u went streaking nude with a Paki
no
hang you by your J's from street wires, triple knot em so yah Airs won't tear
and you'll have front row seats for a retro release of the Air up There
don't get
gat tucked hoping the 4 fit only way this cat will forefeit
with so much Grease on your face, I'm thinkin of making a T bird jacket for it
ok
blamed Che and Castro, but CIA backed gorillas and drug cartels wacked your cousins
should throw a book at this fucker, but then I'd too be guilty of passing judgement
Set up too wordy and just nah
and while you hoarding hunneds, yah fam down in Florida lookin poor n buggin
if they brokedown you wouldn't give em a jump man, let alone some fuckin Jordan Jumpmans
alright
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Originally Posted by ill nik-A View Post
Ya crazy conspiracies…
aren’t making any of us here run without a choice nor a fight
it’s obvious we didn’t need Karaoke last week to prove u don’t have a voice on this site
Ohh dope. Don't think you needed the "it's obvious" part of the punch though
u gettin toyed like a dike, no one respects this lame dame at hand
ya best isn’t a test for me… but the Beta one shows u won’t ask for a name change again
I don't pronounce Beta like that
fuck ya fear of dyin; I pound nerdy round birdies that sound girly
u scared of real beef… so on my grind it’s easy for me to make u eat the ground, turkey
not that great but for some reason I was lolin
go badmouth Cubans but I’m not paranoid & therefore feel nothin
however if my peeps say code black… it’s cuz someone from ur family wants to steal somethin
ehhh nah
smash ya melon in, got robbed last week but not like I fell off, man
u wishin for a fallin star… ur kids are under their bed hopin they didn’t get hit by Elenin
Nah
u bring filler, I go after ya biggest asset & take a swing, nigga
I got punches to knock this rat out cold… u can call my fists chinchillas
Very nice
all ya conspiracy theories are in ya head contradicting fate
But with a style as shaky as yours… it’s no surprise u keep predicting quakes
Haha cool again, nice closer
So.. here's the thing. I had this same problem with first dude last week in that I'm not sure I'm getting half his shit at times. I go with the theory though that if I can understand everyone else's references/punches from overseas then he must just be reachin or poorly wording. Wasn't feeling the verse much at all.

Nik was very slick at times and I dug the wording more. The karaoke line was cool, I dig the chinchilla line & the closer was dope too.

With more quotables, a more comprehensible read and overall better wording & sting...

Vill nik-A

Last edited by Wanderer; 06-11-2015 at 03:48 AM. Reason: Errors fucked post up
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