This was kind of all over the place for me. I see a lot of cool concepts, but it seemed that you rushed this (I see it says speed verse). Had you put more time into this I think you could've made the weak connections a bit stronger. Your lines were too short to really delve into the concepts you wanted to, imo. Next time take more time and try to connect your ideas better and I think you could come up with something dope.
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