Ya girl tops me off good, a damn skank but she knows dick
Dog. She wouldn’t top you off fillin ya gas tank for a road trip
- slick, but have seen these flipped A LOT in my day.
We're all made up of stardust, fgt, what a dubious race
Want proof? I'll beat you down to the Bare Minerals you use on ya face
- this was solid.
vs
fraze in the kitchen with his foot… stomping out the soul from him,
til i leave ‘tac tile impressions’... from the force of his face hitting linoleum
- dope.
excuse me if i’m being morbid, but the source of my enjoyment,
is ‘death and tac’s is’ guaranteed... certain things in life can’t be avoided
- had mad potential. could have been crazy but was mild, as is.
OVERALL: Close one here. I think Tic underestimated his opponent and/or couldn't dig anything up to use against him. Fraze tac tile bar was dope, I liked it. Clean wording w/ a nice harsh execution. Other one I quoted was a nice concept, as well all thou I feel you could have been a little more creative and harsh with it. Kind of left the execution to open. Tic's top off bar was worded nicely, but have seen a lot of those flipped in many ways all involving the dome/gas fill up concept. Bare minerals was nice, tho. Tac tile was LOTB for me, so I'm give it to him...
fraze got it
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