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Originally Posted by eyespaz
I'm just bein me. Fuckin beast that be chokin kids.
So the ONLY way I'd change a Lot is giving out black eyes and a broken rib.
this is aight
I make it rain on hoes. My foes could get covered in dirt er somethin.
Cause I'm rakin in bread.. while you still in that hump pile wit ur cousin.
meh
Your a mess. Tryna come up next but you already lost son.
And if you EVER try to clean up, "aisle" just mop you up like one.
cool but the punch is light
Your girl fine. Easy dime and them hos know I'm a bully.
I bring that thunder, cats.. but no lion when shock her pussy.
bad wording and forced
I should kill this faggot. Them lame bars have it, cause we cant take anymore.
It's embarrassing how you washed up.. esp when it's just ur limbs driftin to shore.
needed to set this up better
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Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk
All your wins from no shows pfft
Ranked in top half pfft,no show wins got ya t think that ya potent
You should be mid tier, at the fact you'll be 2-3 just cuz I showed up & posted
ok personal, but no wp
Ya lame g,verses suck literally hurting people brother
So if eye drops .. They be needed to stop the irratation if I have to read another
could have been cool but this isn't worded at all
Nbl better now,attacking me? my boys got my back I'll warn ya
So we up in the ante,raping that bitch why ya uncle tied up in the corner
ok
Dodging top cats that's just fact, guess sharp got you undercover
Not come into contact wi a dope head, since welfare took you from ya mother
bad wording ok concept
ya x is disease ridden, new hoes will feel shit quick
if a girl want spastic.. She gon need medical advice just to deal with it
no
Over
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This is a close one. Both had a few good concepts, but also had bad misses on wording that made punches ineffective. Spaz's best bar was 'aisle' , but that wasn't a hard hitting punch. Lotto had better concepts overall, but a few of them weren't worded to hit both ways, which makes them feel forced. Despite that, I still have to give him credit for a better verse. However both showed some creative lines so props to you both.
Vote Lotto Smirk