Let's get it started.
I'm just bein me. Fuckin beast that be chokin kids.
So the ONLY way I'd change a Lot is giving out black eyes and a broken rib.
ehh I think wording ruined the potential of this
I make it rain on hoes. My foes could get covered in dirt er somethin.
Cause I'm rakin in bread.. while you still in that hump pile wit ur cousin.
lol pretty cool
Your a mess. Tryna come up next but you already lost son.
And if you EVER try to clean up, "aisle" just mop you up like one.
i don't think u needed quotations, this is decent
Your girl fine. Easy dime and them hos know I'm a bully.
I bring that thunder, cats.. but no lion when shock her pussy.
nah wording on the second line screwed.
I should kill this faggot. Them lame bars have it, cause we cant take anymore.
It's embarrassing how you washed up.. esp when it's just ur limbs driftin to shore.
decent here
you've got the concept going here but your wording and execution is what's hurting you. If you get that down packed I think your bars will come out much better. Decent verse but I've seen better from you guy.
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All your wins from no shows pfft
Ranked in top half pfft,no show wins got ya t think that ya potent
You should be mid tier, at the fact you'll be 2-3 just cuz I showed up & posted
nah not feelin this
Ya lame g,verses suck literally hurting people brother
So if eye drops .. They be needed to stop the irratation if I have to read another
nice I liked this
Nbl better now,attacking me? my boys got my back I'll warn ya
So we up in the ante,raping that bitch why ya uncle tied up in the corner
nah didn't like this
Dodging top cats that's just fact, guess sharp got you undercover
Not come into contact wi a dope head, since welfare took you from ya mother
ehh decent at best
ya x is disease ridden, new hoes will feel shit quick
if a girl want spastic.. She gon need medical advice just to t deal with it
alright pretty clever wp
Lotto you have the potential to bring dope shit each week cause u come up with some good stuff but then add a bunch of bad lines in the mix which hurt your verse.
This is a hell of a close battle, but I've got Lotto winning this by a hair having top 2 lines of the battle IMO. Could go either way.
Vote: Lotto Smirk
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