CopyPat: This was a bizarrely direct take on the topic, which made it all the more beautiful. The rhymes were clunky and the lack of transitionary rhyming made the flow less smooth than usual. But your storytelling was fun, and again, it was bizarrely, perfectly on topic.
MMLP: I liked the evolutionary take on Adam and Eve to a degree. But I felt like your rhyming was more forced and more clunky than CopyPat's, and you didn't flesh out the connection to the topic as well. (Can it be a snake if it has four legs?) I get where you're going here, but I didn't enjoy it very much, certainly not as much as CopyPat's.
Vote: CopyPat
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