Copy -- lol@the verse, but I can't for the life of me figure out how it connects to the pic. That aside -- it felt verse sophmoric coming from you. Rhymes weren't crisp and the humor was more vulgar than comical. Also this didnt really have a sense of effort from you. Just my observation.
MMLP -- Felt like a rushed verse but I know you were a last minute drop in. Kept everything on topic, progressed naturally and rhymed strong. I can't say I've read your stuff really so I can't observe if you are abiding by the laws of this tournament and "being abstract" in respect to your normal style, but what I saw was ambitious.
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Originally Posted by RichardCorey
I can't beat this Pent. I'll admit, on my best day, I couldn't beat this Pent.
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