Hello dead man. This piece, to me, showed some versatility in your writing. You're consistent in giving the reader a wow-factor, however whats truly noteworthy is how you do so in different ways. I enjoyed the strict rhyme scheme. I could relate to the process of maintaining a single set of multies because I did so in the last verse I wrote. It's an enjoyable change and it allows you to write at a different perspective. Anyways, excellent piece my friend
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