Sn00p - flow was dope, first of all. The quasipersonification of a robot rover was cutesy, I was rooting for the thing after you described all of its hazardous damages. The imagery was solid and I could more or less see what was going on.
Lars - In terms of the battle, I think you made every word count and every line significant in that it presented another dimension to the story, whether it be character, setting, imagery, motivation, or what have you. sn00ps flow was really dope but Lars's story telling was superb
voting Lars
sorry for the short vote but in terms of comparing the pieces to eachother i didnt have to say too much
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Originally Posted by asylum
? subtly? what the fuck is a subtly? i dont know what that is. can someone help me out?
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