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Old 06-02-2015, 01:51 PM   #8
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Really enjoyed buddas take on the twisted dark side of biblical times and things.
Was really gruesome in areas. A lot of material written here man. Holy fuck
I dont think either one surpassed the other technically.. was a pretty evenly matched set of skills as for writing goes.
Budda went with a more obvious approach.. i say that because its one of the first ideas that come when i see the topic

Mr.j came with a hint more creativity. Was able to match the darkness budda had imo
I like dark shut so theres no real sway there. Pretty even on both sides other than i feel that mr j went a bit less predictable in his take.

Theres a ton of material here..
Jeres tghe problem.. i liked both sides. I think you both match well and that makes this a great battle. i gotta go with who i think came more creative line for line.. and i got mr.j in this one.

Even though budda wrote a lot more. His shit reay started to become a snore fest. And i hate to say something that derogatory in a vote. But i really lost interest. If it werent a bsttle i would have stopped readibing it.

Mr.j im goibg with you.. i have to say though.. i really dislimed the style you went with as far as flow .. it read more like a battle verse in that it was more settup delivery and didnt feed much into the next set of lines with smooth transitions. I mean face it. We all know im gonna be hard on verses that dont read smooth beings that i put so much pride into my own reading smooth.

Regardless. You took it for your approach. Thought it was a dope concept and i enjoyed it more
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