very ill piece on so many levels. the mechanics was retarded dude, multies and internals all the way through made this very fun to read. I didn't find anything predictable either, which is a sign of some outstanding vocab, I really enjoyed this, it was enlightening to read and it was full of quotables as well. I don't have that much time to drop all of them but here are a few lines I really felt stood out to me.
"..Che Guevara. Things best change tomorrow or I'll leave in a flash of bullets,
Blake, relax and cool it. "Fuck that them bastards blew it,
You're an avid shootist, Couple magazines, gasoline and a match'll do it,
Face it mate this path you're cruisin is a disaster brewin,
You wanna nine to five til the time you die? Then collapse into ruin,
But if you're the Master...Prove it.."
I really enjoyed the swag to this.. flowed impeccable.
"..Grabbin nines and shootin fucks to pass the time and loosen up
A master primed and suiting up with a savage mind that refused to love.."
nice nice nice man.. overall one of the top OM pieces Ive read. and that is saying a lot.
strength and honor. keep writing.
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