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You ugly. No love G and them horror pics you should remove that,
Bc if Jil Valentine anyone, that bitch is only looking for something to shoot at.
cool idea but the punch could be harder
Your a nerd. Talkin crazy's absurd, when you in the ring with a heavyweight.
So if you Dimensioning anything.. it's the weight of my fist through your fuckin face.
die mentioning? creative idea but forced imo
I'm a war chief. I got more beef so I'll just start greeding..
..And if I'm servin quick slices, that means your neck'll leak out the food your eating.
nah
I'm throwing haymakers. This lame faker can't exchange wit us.
The way eye buckle your chest'll make seatbelts look dangerous.
tbh i like the delivery here a lot. idea was ok but delivery made this bar for me
I got that pump gripped. This dumb bitch'll get told.
So when I lash.. bullets'll go through yours and out the back of your skull.
seen the flip, could probably have done more with it but ok
Your fuckin trash, it's true. I'll cruise just to retire this buster.
So when we battle on fair grounds, I'll twist ur spine around like a ferris wheel and roll you into a dumpster.
cool idea but coulda been harder


overall like the potential here but not the best treatment of each idea. wasn't a painful read at all tho, keep it up cause i like your style



protection is useless when a nina goes thru ur vest
losin breath as my 9 Military Heart out after i pin it to his chest
9 mil'll tear e heart? that's a stretch for me but points for effort
Knuck talk shit in the mag. so both'll have tops missing
dropkick em. then put Spaz'n Head in a box after it stops twitching
alright
gotta laser beam tracer synched to infrared, rook
if u cross my Scope Around will exit before u turn ur head & look
ok
dude a loudmouth dickhead til a roundhouse hit 'um
then watch this retarded kid Eye Drop like he had down syndrome
idk i think you coulda done more with this one
keep talkin trash cuz my gun release punches back
all that YAPPIN gonna be followed by a kick, like when chun li attacks
lmao i swear you and allen knight hate each other cause you're a little too alike... solid
then guts start fallin below ur moms lumbar column
so when u hear a click clack under the body it's not car problems
ok but feels a little lazy


i think you had a similar thing to eye where it was good ideas with underwhelming treatment at times, but you had more where they were executed well IMO. good read tho

jil had better executed punches for me. ok battle, like both your styles so keep it up!

v/jilti