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Old 06-01-2015, 02:04 AM   #12
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wave good riddance to fools, allow admittance to few
the circles for winners, a whole different dimension to you

that was the standout for me here

just worded smoothly enough to come off that bit better when read out loud

I was reading the OM mag recently where Sharp I think mentioned about liking your more sporadic and freewheeling verses as opposed to the machanical overthought is, this here's a prime example IMHO

pen game is sick given how quick I trust you would put something like this together

vintage Mr. j ish lol

Keep that pen moving!
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