When it came to Contendership, you were never on the brink of discussion
Even the Grammer shows Frasier running on air.. trust, I'll make ya shrink if you buzz-in
^cool
Getcha mind blew back.. I'll leave your household on an ice cube slab
You think Family Matters, I'll Catchphrase w/ the strap on his chest; "Did I do thaaat?!"
^rly dont get the ice cube slab part lol. rest was pretty cool
If I'm sprayin chrome at his neck, it's part of the home invasion
If he's sprayin Chrome at my neck, this fag just copped the Azzaro cologne from Macy's
^cool again
All ya concepts are drawn out.. my shots'll hit you dead in the chest
The bottom line, Fraze'll get hemmed up for even steppin to the thread w/ a stretch
^dont get this at all. phrasal? what's the connection to hem then? ...oh. the connection is hem & stretch. okay. not bad then. but goddammit, ur wording is making it hard on a foreigner
vs.
step to fraze? you know the drill, nah homie thats bad business
If i get in your grill... ill leave your feelings hurting like a bad dentist
^this is played. double wp & setup tie-in makes it better for sure tho
bout to ‘shit on your mother’ its no fair. she's ugly fat and has no hair,
i'll make her strip, poker, then drop three deuces on her low pair,
^again, the wp feels old. there were a lotta connections tho, so props on that. seems u rly know how to formulate a punch, but maybe need to get a better feeling for what's been done
you shot who? ….stop fool, gun bars are not you, don’t bother kid,
that’s a pop quiz failed quicker than asking his mom who his father is,
^cool
fuck having patience... I'm gon bash this bastard with the wrath of satan,
while he beats AROUND the bush... he couldn't even master masturbation
^ehh, don't rly like this. reminds me of the "he so dumb he..." type of lines, and those were always corny
I’ll smack him wit a two by four, displace his bottom jaw with boards,
then ask Neighbor, ‘What’s next?’ like “Brad and Randy are skipping chores…”
^pretty much all home improvement lines have been done on neighbor by now. this was aite
this fag got pinched and turned snitch, but what makes it worse is,
after he was given Hush money… now he’s spent 10k on verses...
^not the freshest wp, but w/ a current event tie in. it's an okay line
well. fraze isn't bad. he has good flips w/ a lotta connections and tie ins, but his wp's are a little played at times. if he can stick to fresh wordplay, i can def see him drop some hard hitters. neigh still going w/ his new style. which is cool. def a different feel, and that's dope. the wording makes it hard for me as a german to get all the connections sometimes, but the concepts are cool too. so yea, both had good wording imo, but neigh had the fresher concepts. that's why i have him. props to both
v/neigh
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