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Old 05-31-2015, 07:36 PM   #2
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That intro though..

I like the concept of how you opened this piece
The rest flowed together pretty good to the tell the truth
Halfway through it may have seemed confusing to me
But when the mood strikes I also dont follow the rules
the second half was a stronger showing of how it should end
and your internals are very impressive. good show my friend
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