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Old 05-26-2015, 09:47 AM   #9
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It's odd that I haven't had the oppurtunity to read this
but for the most part, I really did enjoy how you crafted this together
in fact I enjoy how you craft a majority of your pieces together
you have this hermit like style, that makes me want to read books and eat cake
but I realize I can't read after something like this, which makes me sad
otherwise...

bitter wine. lemon lime. sprite and syrup and smoke
microbial, the misanthrope in search of a host
i'm measured by how many numbers yearly i gross
but the times i'm most secure is when i miss you the most.
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this is dope right here..I enjoy that whole section
sometimes when I see something deep as this it makes me want to do it
but then I'm like nah, that's for you folks with your crumpets and what not
the mind is a door, and the key is to use all the potential you have
and you seem to have yours built like a barn door
dope shit breh..
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