this was an interesting piece...when was this done is my question
although I consider myself to be quite up to date in my OM I'm surprised I missed this
must have been during the great hiatus, quite an interesting piece though
the descriptions alone draw the reader in and you introduce your intricate vocab
as I was reading this I was immersed in your imagery and it tickled my fancy
the two verses clash together nicely, and the image helps build the foundation
it's been awhile since I seen a 'Witty' piece that made me stop and read
well...it is the feeding..
carry on..nice work
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