[Mr. J]

I thought this was cool, not really eye catching at first
I feel how you set up each line makes me feel like I'm looking at a Twista rap
it sounds good but when I see all the words together..eh...
anyway I thought the most impressive part was the bottom half
a different take on what's been going on here lately..but interesting to say the least
in the end I didn't feel any different when I saw the structure
either way this was a nice little refresher keep writing breh