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Originally Posted by fraze
what’s killing text… y’all motherfuckers ‘feel yourselves too much’
just a bunch of ‘immature kids who never grew up’
This isn't saying much and it's not directed at your opponent.
you're 'internet text battle champ’?…. i’d rather make a few bucks,
i'll ‘pimp your sisters’ on the strip and still ‘not give two fucks’,
This was ok I guess
‘phrases’ better than ever, yet i never battled for years,
your skills are ‘decrepit’… that's how 'long you’ve been posting' here.
Nah
its a little bit ironic to me most of yall are ‘homophobes’,
when there’s ‘more dickriding’ going on than ‘gay cowboy rodeos’,
Nope
don’t believe your ‘glocks’, 'techs', 'straps', 'piece', or your ‘nine’,
you've only ever shot a webcam.... you’re ‘posing online’
This was meh.
all these fucking ‘quotes’ are lame, that’s how i feel about em,
but niggas barely read so they ain’t seeing ‘mine’ without em,
Nah idk what this is
ever bar i wrote was played? you heard every flip before?
all that 'shade' makes sense… you DO 'spend all your time indoors’
Ok
you don’t like my rhyme scheme? like i give a fuck dude,
all that hating shit is for the burds…. so fuck you
No
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Ok this seems to be a site diss. There were a couple ok lines and a few that were easy to pick up on in terms of concepts. Obviously you aren't motivated for battling. Seems like if you tried you could be pretty decent based on what I'm seeing, at least if you directed your lines at someone. But it seems you have no drive.
You need to think out of the box when you come up with concepts. Tons of concepts have been done, but try to put a new spin on it. If it came easy and it's the first thing you thought of, it's most likely been done before.