[Sn00p]

Originally Posted by fraze

what’s killing text… y’all motherfuckers ‘feel yourselves too much’
just a bunch of ‘immature kids who never grew up’
.......this is not really directed at ur opponent and thus doesn't have much impact.
you're 'internet text battle champ’?…. i’d rather make a few bucks,
i'll ‘pimp your sisters’ on the strip and still ‘not give two fucks’,
........eh. why is internet text battle champ in quotes? line is kinda generic and basic, but a decent punch. personally, I have never seen it but it could be played.
‘phrases’ better than ever, yet i never battled for years,
your skills are ‘decrepit’… that's how 'long you’ve been posting' here.
........aite, decent concept
its a little bit ironic to me most of yall are ‘homophobes’,
when there’s ‘more dickriding’ going on than ‘gay cowboy rodeos’,
.......i'd advise not using quotes unless lines are reeeeally hard to get otherwise. and this simile is pretty lazy, becuz the connection is too obvious. also, not directed at ur opponent
don’t believe your ‘glocks’, 'techs', 'straps', 'piece', or your ‘nine’,
you've only ever shot a webcam.... you’re ‘posing online’
......cool. I like the concept. but quotes are unnecessary again.
all these fucking ‘quotes’ are lame, that’s how i feel about em,
but niggas barely read so they ain’t seeing ‘mine’ without em,
.......again not directed at ur opponent
ever bar i wrote was played? you heard every flip before?
all that 'shade' makes sense… you DO 'spend all your time indoors’
.....the angle was good, the flip could've been harsher
you don’t like my rhyme scheme? like i give a fuck dude,
all that hating shit is for the burds…. so fuck you
........cool concept, unfortunately most burd flips are played

try and keep ur lines relevant to ur opponent. and use quotes only when absolutely necessary. maybe read snore battles to see what flies around here. the basics are all there tho. u have many dope concepts