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Old 05-24-2015, 01:38 PM   #14
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Originally Posted by Sharp View Post
pedo motherfucker. you get turned on every time a preteen pass
ya boys can tell you Dugg'ar cuz youre more of a molester than his creepy ass
don't get the reference
You suck at wordplay. In text there's nuthin worse
Dumbass couldn't even turn a fraze without feedin off his fuckin verse
Ok
Text is everything to you. without it you'd have nothin, bitch
Your sad ass tries to drop bars in the middle of chats on some @Lil Muffin shit
Meh
Every verse is wannabe gutter shit. you must be sufferin brain erosion
This fag Ra's a Ghul? Only cause he been bombing like a fuckin train explosion
Not really feeling
Fuck your slashes. the oldschool bars are just wack shit
Ain't really throwback drops... its more like some limp-wristed backwards
Nah
passes
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Originally Posted by Razah View Post
Fuck rap it's gun claps, squaddd uppp; I'm 'bout to mess up the game
With all the Chinks' in your armor - Ya'll gonna end up the same
Didn't like the wording
I hope you don't actually rap, silence is best for this brutha'
The moment you speak we say Sh sh sh sh like we developed a stutter//
Not really feeling
Your raps are written poorly, the technique is weak with no recovering
& your verses got a stream of consciousness that are steady buffering
Nah
He's the softest I've seen, he's not offended if I'm calling him gay
If you're into that, he has the voice of an angel & plays the harp in his name//
Doesn't really work
Another target to slay, a phony a fake, no bite & it's too late to bark
On some real life, I got money & ho's, and I'm sorry, you'll never be razor, sharp.
Nah
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Sharp clearly didn't come with his best and razah was just blah I dunno. Sharp takes it overall cos if I was feeling anything at all it was that fraze line.. Looking back ras a ghul not terrible either. Just edging it on consistency I gotta go with Sharp

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