05-24-2015, 01:13 PM
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#9
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Senior Member
Join Date: Mar 2013
Location: Louisville, KY
Posts: 972
Battle Record: 14-24
Rep Power: 32898726
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Originally Posted by Sharp
pedo motherfucker. you get turned on every time a preteen pass
ya boys can tell you Dugg'ar cuz youre more of a molester than his creepy ass
light hit on forced wp
You suck at wordplay. In text there's nuthin worse
Dumbass couldn't even turn a fraze without feedin off his fuckin verse
this wp is too simple. But nice personal
Text is everything to you. without it you'd have nothin, bitch
Your sad ass tries to drop bars in the middle of chats on some @ Lil Muffin shit
simple flip. light hit but personal
Every verse is wannabe gutter shit. you must be sufferin brain erosion
This fag Ra's a Ghul? Only cause he been bombing like a fuckin train explosion
I want to give you credit but this is kind of forced
Fuck your slashes. the oldschool bars are just wack shit
Ain't really throwback drops... its more like some limp-wristed backwards passes
light
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Originally Posted by Razah
Fuck rap it's gun claps, squaddd uppp; I'm 'bout to mess up the game
With all the Chinks' in your armor - Ya'll gonna end up the same
played and not a hard hit
I hope you don't actually rap, silence is best for this brutha'
The moment you speak we say Sh sh sh sh like we developed a stutter//
not really with it as written but the concept is ok
Your raps are written poorly, the technique is weak with no recovering
& your verses got a stream of consciousness that are steady buffering
cool concept bad wording
He's the softest I've seen, he's not offended if I'm calling him gay
If you're into that, he has the voice of an angel & plays the harp in his name//
light diss on a forced punch
Another target to slay, a phony a fake, no bite & it's too late to bark
On some real life, I got money & ho's, and I'm sorry, you'll never be razor, sharp.
too simple not to be played. I basically used this concept in my battle against you, so Id like to see more creativity in your flip
Now, on to the weekend. Holler.
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Being honest this is a cool battle but I wasn't feeling much from either. Sharp seemed like he was sleepwalking through the verse. He had some nice personals, but mostly just with light jabs. Razah had some flow but his concepts were on the simple side. Sharp takes this on better execution.
vote sharp
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