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Originally Posted by Lil Muffin
aight this is just the beginning
archeologist flow
Tool sifting. Call him Vincent Vega..NO bullshiting
A nigga ride around with Smirk? I'll kill him toward the end if he think that this is pulp fiction
not set up well. Who calls him Vincent Vega? Doesn't make sense so its a stretch to me. Wording in the punch is tight tho.
Call me Sam Raimi..kindly screen my head
Ya chickll do it for the vine till she gets fucked in all holes on mine no Evil Dead
see the flip but don't get the reference 100% so this is light to me
Yeah I eyed a hoe. Team played some hot potato
Take your chick to Wolfgang Puck then let my Wolfgang fuck her on an Air Hockey Table
humour bar.
This a home invasion. Fam at ya front door w/ the cans out
It'll be my dog comin through the Screen chasing a Runner like Sandlot
not feeling this
U snitch on ya niggas. Tru story 4 the glory Ud never hack it
Ud call on the rats to free you from them straps..that's a story ripped from edgar Allen
cool lit reference but this doesn't hit hard
Buddy I'm dope the kid is a misfit u try to provoke but u gettin the biz Ness
The last time you put in a bid for ya city you tried to vote on the Winter Olympics
light jab
Bolo script. My Gang is Khans. Ya girl'l pogo stick
Ya bitch'll close her eyes n swim to any nigga that holler no marco polo shit
strong closer. Your best bar. Slight force on Khans but coo
Creative Ejaculate
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Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk
Muff wi girls is Something to laugh at, stop frontin now ya rap wack
Heard muff cumin up hard his girl says he's only lasts ten secs like a snapchat
concept is there but not worded as harsh as it could be
changing names, that's flaming lame ya a washout & a nerd kid
Got rid of your attack n ironically the same happened with ya verses
nope
5 days drunk, posting trashy lyrics,please kid I do this with ease
Muff dedicated his life to text .. only to gain kidney failure & liver disease
this is more sad truth than a punchline. ok i guess
Past ya prime, quoting yourself as ya role model is frightening
your only on ya Wayne shit cuz ya long in the tooth just like him
long in the tooth is a weak diss
Act like the greatest,he's overrated who's better than the rest me
His talent seeing a shrink, exactly what he needs for his addiction to netcees
horrible wording. if you rephrased this would hit so much harder
Ya not top ten, wasted to much of ya life on nc acting like the don
guess you finally made the list .... Benefits ..& .. the unemployment one
nice concept. Better wording
Text ain't srs but I'll end your career before the trails done & thru
Save pancake a job .. You should apply mabye he can employ you
nah
Meh rusty
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muff has marco polo and maybe Wolfgang for lols. Smirk only had unemployment list really. Muff verse was pretty bland to me, other than the LOTB closer. Smirk had some nice creativity in concepts but missed with bad wording. Honestly a close one to me because Smirks misses werent that bad but his hits weren't as good as Muffs.
Real talk this is a close one to call. Honestly I'd probably vote tie if that's possible. If not I want to reward the more creative verse, which in this case is Smirk. Props to both of you. Good battle.
vote tie, tiebreaker to Smirk