[Sharp]

Tool sifting. Call him Vincent Vega..NO bullshiting
A nigga ride around with Smirk? I'll kill him toward the end if he think that this is pulp fiction
cool idea but not too strong
Call me Sam Raimi..kindly screen my head
Ya chickll do it for the vine till she gets fucked in all holes on mine no Evil Dead
swaggin more than anything
Yeah I eyed a hoe. Team played some hot potato
Take your chick to Wolfgang Puck then let my Wolfgang fuck her on an Air Hockey Table
nope
This a home invasion. Fam at ya front door w/ the cans out
It'll be my dog comin through the Screen chasing a Runner like Sandlot
ok idea
U snitch on ya niggas. Tru story 4 the glory Ud never hack it
Ud call on the rats to free you from them straps..that's a story ripped from edgar Allen
rhyme is way off. Also missing what is meant by straps metaphorically
Buddy I'm dope the kid is a misfit u try to provoke but u gettin the biz Ness
The last time you put in a bid for ya city you tried to vote on the Winter Olympics
eh funny
Bolo script. My Gang is Khans. Ya girl'l pogo stick
Ya bitch'll close her eyes n swim to any nigga that holler no marco polo shit
funny ok




Muff wi girls is Something to laugh at, stop frontin now ya rap wack
Heard muff cumin up hard his girl says he's only lasts ten secs like a snapchat
good idea that could a been worded way better
changing names, that's flaming lame ya a washout & a nerd kid
Got rid of your attack n ironically the same happened with ya verses
see the flip. Ok
5 days drunk, posting trashy lyrics,please kid I do this with ease
Muff dedicated his life to text .. only to gain kidney failure & liver disease
OK idea but could hit harder
Past ya prime, quoting yourself as ya role model is frightening
your only on ya Wayne shit cuz ya long in the tooth just like him
is this like with his grill or are you taking a roundabout way to say he's old? Either way not really hitting
Act like the greatest,he's overrated who's better than the rest me
His talent seeing a shrink, exactly what he needs for his addiction to netcees
kinda predictable but personal
Ya not top ten, wasted to much of ya life on nc acting like the don
guess you finally made the list .... Benefits ..& .. the unemployment one
what's with the wording at the end? Kinda weird delivery, took away from this
Text ain't srs but I'll end your career before the trails done & thru
Save pancake a job .. You should apply mabye he can employ you
missing something here


OK I started watching a lot more URL battles than normal when people put up NOME5 links so I get where you're coming from muff but it doesn't always transfer in text well. You can't make me hear 'hack it' rhyme with 'Allen' lol. Respect for trying something new but this isn't the end all be all of text. Lotto not bad, just putting together wording and delivery hurt you here. I liked some ideas and I appreciate you went for personals more than generics but I felt like a lot were just ideas that didn't get totally worked. I know you're a busy man so props for showing and putting thought into it, but I've seen better from you. Next time maybe try the minimum and make em sting more. Feel like you'll do great in the 1-2 league when that happens. That said I think muff had the wording to do more damage. Felt his verse hit harder

V/muff