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Originally Posted by Lil Muffin
aight this is just the beginning
archeologist flow
Tool sifting. Call him Vincent Vega..NO bullshiting
A nigga ride around with Smirk? I'll kill him toward the end if he think that this is pulp fiction
This was ok. Wording was stretched tho.
Call me Sam Raimi..kindly screen my head
Ya chickll do it for the vine till she gets fucked in all holes on mine no Evil Dead
Didn't like this.
Yeah I eyed a hoe. Team played some hot potato
Take your chick to Wolfgang Puck then let my Wolfgang fuck her on an Air Hockey Table
This is weird.
This a home invasion. Fam at ya front door w/ the cans out
It'll be my dog comin through the Screen chasing a Runner like Sandlot
This doesn't rhyme.
U snitch on ya niggas. Tru story 4 the glory Ud never hack it
Ud call on the rats to free you from them straps..that's a story ripped from edgar Allen
Ok?
Buddy I'm dope the kid is a misfit u try to provoke but u gettin the biz Ness
The last time you put in a bid for ya city you tried to vote on the Winter Olympics
Ok, your best line so far.
Bolo script. My Gang is Khans. Ya girl'l pogo stick
Ya bitch'll close her eyes n swim to any nigga that holler no marco polo shit
Didn't like how this was executed. Cool concept tho.
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Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk
Muff wi girls is Something to laugh at, stop frontin now ya rap wack
Heard muff cumin up hard his girl says he's only lasts ten secs like a snapchat
This was ok.
changing names, that's flaming lame ya a washout & a nerd kid
Got rid of your attack n ironically the same happened with ya verses
Not a huge fan of this.
5 days drunk, posting trashy lyrics,please kid I do this with ease
Muff dedicated his life to text .. only to gain kidney failure & liver disease
Ehh.
Past ya prime, quoting yourself as ya role model is frightening
your only on ya Wayne shit cuz ya long in the tooth just like him
Nah.
Act like the greatest,he's overrated who's better than the rest me
His talent seeing a shrink, exactly what he needs for his addiction to netcees
Concept was good, but the execution was not.
Ya not top ten, wasted to much of ya life on nc acting like the don
guess you finally made the list .... Benefits ..& .. the unemployment one
Nah.
Text ain't srs but I'll end your career before the trails done & thru
Save pancake a job .. You should apply mabye he can employ you
Nah.
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Man, this was underwhelming. Muff didn't really have much, but I liked a couple of his lines (kinda). His execution seemed off to me and got a bit wordy at times. Lotto definitely seems rusty because he had some good battles in the past. Had a couple nice concepts, just off on the execution. Similar to Muff actually, except Muff had better execution overall, despite some of his fucking weird ass lines. I feel like wording each punch twice with different execution gives you a better idea of what will hit better. With that said, Muff edges this.