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Old 05-21-2015, 01:13 AM   #14
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GREED


The reason you so far from the top is you dont got bars for the block
Your swag wack nd when j crew come around they wearing ralph lauren and crocs

this sounds pretty played. not really creative. kinda corny. but ok.

Buddy really i got mad guap, i could take ya bish pronto
Ugly nigga get yo ass shot... nd i aint talkin bout tish faco

lol

I think you seriously have a problem. You need help and i know why
Cause as far as junkies go, they would be more creative then that shit you spit on the fly

?

I call jun girl like 'i mishima'... her friend in the background like 'yoshimitsu too homes'
I dont even need a weapon if i sneak the tekken i kazuya kicked the side of this dude dome

kinda forcing some of this but 'yoshimitsu too' was pretty clever imo. the actual punch sort of fell flat.

The original greedy nigga, from birth to 2015 i been known to clean up plates
This may, junto, july's gon have you feeling like you got beat for 3 months straigh

meh


JUNTO

Pump & dump case... I'll break this down like stock so you agree
Earnings low, the Street dont fuck wit u. 'Target price' is $0 - niggas'll knock u off for free

all around just not great for me. why did you apostrophe target price? is that a wordplay or something?

So I guess I'm battling Greed now, haha, that's a blessing dude
I wrote that first bar for Aer. I wouldn't waste a fuckin breath on you.

that partial nameplay shit is whack but this was ok.

Plus you know that fat hoe of yours is taking nuts often right?
G-strings the longest Silk Road. & her pussy seen more traffic than the drug-market site

lol

You should improve ya image cuz you're a gimmick to these known vets kid
But I got NO respect for u. I'd never give up a second helping, on some Joe Metts shit

ok. i get it. cause he's a larger dude. cool.

You won't just die..... cuz with torture I'm exquisite. Modestly.
Take u so deep in the woods, to a place where Yellen don't even affect fiscal policy

you could have flipped that way better but cool.


v/ JUNTO


I wasnt a fan of a lot of his wording but his basic conceptual ideas for punchlines were more effective than greed's. i think by a long-ish shot.

cool battle guys thx
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