[Destroyer]

This cunt legit is gon' die, battle's bout'a be bloodier than a "Bag of used tampons" with a shiv through his thigh!
He's "stuck up" on an internet high, not even "dope on the board" when ya circuit surfin', you worthless virgin!!

a bag of used tampons doesn't have a thigh so this doesn't make sense
also it just rhymes, there's really no punch

You'd only see a tit if it's an African bird plus you're bars are wack + trash and absurd!
Bags would only be "the shit" n' "on a throne" if he was passin' a turd!!

would only be the shit if he was passing a turd is played bro. like been done. a lot. and I may have never even seen it, but I know. that's how played it is

I bring the action in verbs, I'll pop a bag while I'm collapsin' this nerd!
I'm Ullr, bitch! All I need's an Axe and my word to hack you to pieces and put you back to the dirt!!

again no punch, just you talking up yourself. which is great in a swag verse, but this is a battle.

This fucker's trash, literally, a tyke with no skill! If Aero goes hard off the handle it's on a bike with no wheels!!
He ain't close to as hard with sharpened bars as I am - I'll bring an Aero to his knees like a Guard in Skyrim!

this was your most ok bar but aero to his knees? you mean you'll bring a guard to his knees with an arrow? it's just worded awkward and therefore doesn't work.

I'll drop ya team with a Wesson, Catch n' put his ass to sleep, call it dream interception - I'll put Bags in a Bag like a scene from Inception!!
This Bag faggot only hits dope in intravenous injections - this dick would only be "ill" with a penis infection!!!

this was like 4 lines in two, it's just too damn wordy. and bags-related punches are ALL played.