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Old 05-18-2015, 04:49 AM   #1
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Junto had an okay verse. Like, all the bars were okay, nothing was like, Ahhh that was cool, or whatever.

This is what I liked from Snoop:
^that's ironic. i mean idk if this kid reads news...
but the way u die here... seems like u're doing a BB impression this week too

& to be sure he dies in the dirt, i empty the mag when fighting this nerd
make the whole clip dissappear like no, i don't need help w/ microsoft word

The BB line was kinda bogus, but.. it was a good bar. I dunno why the Microsoft Word line made me laugh. I can actually hear that being said, so that stood out to me.

I dunno, I'm noticing cats having kinda wordy bars with good concepts, but wordy for the sake of making the punch work. I'ma have to go with Snoop

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