You’ll leave the league soon cuz you’re far from king
I’d label wannabe keeper but his punches neither harm nor sting
^aite, dece
Ya style is reaaaaal hard to cop, you'll stomp the yard bro? Stop
Keep steppin & all you’ll see is 2 hands to the face….Movado watch
^coo
Feed on ya last verse? ‘Played w/ no impact, clever or fresh’
Idk what anyone sees in wan when ya punches date back to that era of text
^liked it. didn't rly feel stretched to me
Idgaf I’ll singe ya lips, like yea kid extinguish this
‘N finally when that long nose Extenze, you’ll leak all over…Strikta’s bitch
^dece current event
Ya old girl doesn’t play games, she left you rookie
It’s sad…the closer you are to Xbox the further you get from pussy
^eh, seen this wp too many times
Prob a Harry Potter fan, that Spells faggot & I meant to expose ‘em
It’s simple. One punch’ll put wand in the air like expecto patronum
^aite
vs.
How can I take you serious? Ain't nobody in the NBL you can test
Only way I wanna see you Sign-In is if my blows to your head leave ya Deaf
^aaaite. flip could'a been harsher, but the concept was def there
You're a nobody, sleepin on medals and honours. Wanderer famous for the way he grabbing em
Shit son, with the headlines I'm making.. the ones on ya pillow look lame in comparison
^make ur setups shorter. concept was dece, but not too hard-hitting/impacting
Talentless bum. You ain't fresh or clean with text/hygiene.. I generally abuse your types
How is it fair that I Leak Hot Shit - yet you just SMELL like broken sewage pipes
^again, shorten ur setups. the 'talentless bum' part was unnecessary. shit wp is pretty old. u'd have to try rly hard to flip it in a way it becomes a hit
An don't talk shit about game with chicks. Honestly, everybody knows you're a fake
In fact.. Only time I ever see T.bone is when I'm ordering steak
^aite, not a bad line. but one letter nameplays are kinda lazy. u shud only use 'em as a last resort
See.. Latino girls don't take they clothes off around him OR his impotent clique
Realised he can only shave his pubic hair to make a Brazilian strip
^played, but this wasn't a bad idea
You can't intrigue an audience like me, you're such a lazy cunt I wanna stab you
When people assume you In-te-resting.. it's cos you don't produce anything of any value
^kiiinda forced. but the concept is decent. just the 'dont produce anything of value' part lacked sting & made the line fall flat
tic tac was overall better. wanderer has some nice ideas, but since he's new, he prolly just doesn't what's played and how to execute his concepts for maximum potential. once he gets that down, he cud be prtty good.
v/tic
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