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Old 05-15-2015, 03:05 PM   #4
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This seemed like a spitting image of Cam'rons 'I Hate My Job'
Its out of your comfort zone and adds a new twist to your writing
Really enjoyable stuff because your flow remains intact
the vibe you gave off made the read feel like ot was weaved together effortlessly
one of my faves among a few of your other pieces..keep it up coffee pot
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