[Cashius]

Originally Posted by Razah

So, uhm.

Nobody battles- Crack jokes & laugh, it's what they happen to do
And now I'm part of them too since I learned I was battling you

Pretty basic and a bit stale

It's been so long, still, I'm killing this dweeb
How could I lose to someone named after what Indians eat//

I don't get it. Sorry.

That's nonsense- It doesn't matter what you say now
All that shit is played out, even saying that shit is played out

Nah. Not feeling it.

Please, take that smirk off, homie don't be lacking
Guarantee that smile ain't the only thing that's cracking//

Too basic. Stale. You need to be more creative.

This is like a mosh pit with bombs bitch, don't step to me man
Cuz I'll put a slash in your throat & make room for the rest of the band

That's a bit better. Try using more lines like this where everything isn't so obvious and basic.