[Cashius]

Originally Posted by Wanderer

Fuck this Lightweight Faggot, you goin home early again just standard
I've Wasted you with this first Bar - you always stumble out of em hammered

Very very played concept.

Claim to be dope but you a liar, got the chokehold on you so the truth transpire
It's no wonder all your bars so wack.. You need oxygen to make fire

Eh. I see what you're trying to do. Just not a lot of impact.

Small Fish, got bars of lame gun talk, the ice beneath you startin to look thin
I'm sure your whole crew surrounded by metal - nobody ever told you that's a sardine tin

Again...I see the concept...there's just not much connection. Saying he's in a sardines can just doesn't have a whole lot of impact. I'd rather see something like "the only metal you're around is....."

I'm after the win, you bite all your writtens faggot, an still they ain't good enough to archive a stash
Don't get me wrong you often Outstandin - by garbage cans tryna recycle trash

Very played again.

Don't consider the bars of a waster, this dude think corny lines are the best
I know you think your Cheese Greater - I just wanna see that many holes in ya chest

I think the cheese greater is prolly played. And I'd rather see the punch being about his money if you're using the "cheese" concept.

Are you depressed? deluded thinking you'd impress or that ya chances in a higher position
You so fuckin Shocked how I've made Light Work of you, they gonna be calling me Electrician

Again...very played.