While I'm searching for pussy for taking down, you're looking for dudes to lay and pound
When a girl asks "What's your sign?" you hold up the one that says "Gay and Proud"
^aight
You're certainly whack, kid. Can't clash with Cash...that courage, you lack it
I understand why people think that you're Split...it's cuz your half nerd and half faggot
^wp seems played, but i really liked the execution. wording was harsh
I got home videos of hitting pussy that would leave you pissing on yourself
If YOU'RE making a video with box in it...I bet that it's prolly similar to Zelf's
^kinda decent current event line
Hush wants to know how to grow outdoors...he's cutting and bagging on occasion
You wanna know how to grow outdoors too...
Cause your childhood was nothing but Dungeons and Dragons in your basement.
^not a fan of the 3 line style. was still good tho
Bitches never flock...Ain't none of'em licking on your cock, kid...
If a chick is even seen with Sharper Image will plummet quicker then their stock did
^yup, decent
I won't lie though...I see you fucking some of these broads hard...
But either shar pei for them bitches or they're uglier than those dogs ar
^not bad again
Word on the street is you're hung 3cm...that shit is a joke, you twerp
I don't care how hard that Nine Inch Nails a bitch...it still wouldn't be known to Hurt
^doesn't work for me. how hard that Nine inch nails a bitch? as in, how hard he inch nails a bitch? becuz 1 inch is roughly 3cm? but using inch nail as a verb feels forced. or how hard nine's inch nails a bitch? that works better, actually. yea, reading it that way, it still doesn't work perfectly, but it's okay
vs.
Your champ run's 'bout to end in pain. Trust, Sharp'll waste you
Fuck ending on a sour note, this'll make Jamie Foxx's Anthem look tasteful
^aight, works well as a current event line
Said he wants a Karaoke win streak. That'd cut the league's progress
If C span goes for 10 weeks it'd be fucking duller than their coverage of Congress
^wording cuda been harsher. esp the 'fucking duller' part. still fresh, so it was good to me
I'm laid back and low key. As exciting as me? Please, b
After college I cleaned up my act... you picked up the personality of a squeegee
^this coulda been dope. the clean up my act/bland persona concept is nice. but i didn't rly like the execution
Those accomps are ALL NC2. Zero competition is what's spurring your climb
Face it. You're more dependent on new blood than the Red Cross during wartime.
^aaaight. not the harshest tho
You're still champ cause jil blew it. For real, those stanzas sucked
Had Jameis'in everywhere... no surprise you looked worse than the Tampa Bucs
^jay missin? fresh wp. good line
You can barely drop a minimum. You got no motivation or you're a frugal cock
Your account isn't just missing drive. It makes me nostalgic for Google docs
^aight, decent
You'd let your favorite battlers defile you. It wouldn't help anyway, bub
you want a trickle down effect...
But lookin at your bars its clear Bags is just interested in that anime slut
^the concept was there, but the execution wasn't clear enough to make this a hit
this is HELLA close. i think i got cash w/ one less miss. good read, both dropped nice. and yea, this is fucking close. i can def see ppl voting sharp and this going to him. and i really wanna vote for him too, cuz this was a good verse, and he was the underdog & everything. but i have cash being a tiny bit more consistent. still. this can go either way for sure. so props to both
v/cash
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