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Old 05-11-2015, 02:18 PM   #8
fraze
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Mutilate

If you & @Amen had a gay off, you'd win cause you way better
Huggin men tighter then ever...you remind me of maywether
Lots of mayweather punches. This was cool, but not that harsh
You textcee alumni? Is you dumb high? This can't be life
They saying you the GOAT - well. this here is my sacrifice
like the concept but not the wording
I'm after Christ to put you in the afterlife, I'll get you dropped guy
List of "greats of all time" T-Mobile wouldn't put you in their Top 5
this is weak to me
So you better Book, or the Gatsby in your face once my goons see the light is green
Filled with envy till you get 2 black eyes boy my punches Sting
this seems a little forced to me. and a gatsby reference? you gotta come harder than that to make it not seem corny
At the gym tryna flex, I'll bench press & make it not seem hard
You can't even hold your own.. Everyone seziure a little shaky with the Bars
meh. you can't tell me you haven't seen a seizure flip before
Don't place em with the stars, he wouldn't even fake pop like diet rite
I'm not buying rounds when Im giving out shots tonight
this is a common flip so i would have liked to see something more creative


Allen Knight

gotta Hanzo blade ready for the attack route
cuz Visa faggot & i'll swipe his face w/ the side till his life max out
didn't like the setup but the punch is coo
ur the type to run from fights, ima boss w/ horror
cuz Claiborne a bitch & u can smell the sent of pussy off his aura
i would have taken this name play a different direction but aight
& ur moms a huge slut, that my crews hittin sloppy
we Ultron get in that pussy cuz she stays jumpin to different bodies
this is a little forced but i like the 80s giant robot reference
everything u drops played as fuck, its a bore & tragic
bars Clay Figures dope been molded into verses yrs before this faggot
wording is awkward but nice concept
ur hoes enormous & ugly, every day she gotta feast
cuz u Feta till she was sloppy & her pussy smelt like rotten cheese
she should work on her hygiene.
i'll crush ur skull w/ fists, thats why ur fuckin hiding fool
hooks smash Clayface till it shape shifts into somthin unrecognizable
this was cool but almost the same concept as the clay figures bar

Mutilate had the GOAT bar, that was cool, but nothing much stood out in the rest of the verse. Some of the concepts you picked have been done to death, so it helps if you come up with some extra flair to make it original.

Allen Knight did his thing. Solid verse. Decent levels of creativity and nothing was horribly played or forced. Kinda out classed the competition here.

Vote: Allen Knight
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