Glee was ok attempt... Wording is the big thing letting you down. Gotta make it crisp, and with a clear punch and wp if you use it. Punched with a heater was your best worded bar. Keep dropping
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Head in the clouds was cool, good wording/set up, def fuckin 5 was lol, cool... Twenty in a clip and working girl were both decent, and I didn't catch the closer. Your wording and flips are really good and often turn a concept that's just OK into something pretty decent, well done.
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