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Old 05-09-2015, 11:14 AM   #5
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Fuck this Lightweight Faggot, you goin home early again just standard
I've Wasted you with this first Bar - you always stumble out of em hammered
The bar flip is played to death. I appreciate the extra effort by including wasted but when people see it enough they start to expect it before the punchline =, which mkaes it less effective
Claim to be dope but you a liar, got the chokehold on you so the truth transpire
It's no wonder all your bars so wack.. You need oxygen to make fire
Love the wording here. ok flip, good bar
Small Fish, got bars of lame gun talk, the ice beneath you startin to look thin
I'm sure your whole crew surrounded by metal - nobody ever told you that's a sardine tin
tbh I like this bar a lot
I'm after the win, you bite all your writtens faggot, an still they ain't good enough to archive a stash
Don't get me wrong you often Outstandin - by garbage cans tryna recycle trash
havent seen ti before but ok. wasn't a huge hit but didn't miss
Don't consider the bars of a waster, this dude think corny lines are the best
I know you think your Cheese Greater - I just wanna see that many holes in ya chest
this one's a bit of a stretch with the wp.
Are you depressed? deluded thinking you'd impress or that ya chances in a higher position
You so fuckin Shocked how I've made Light Work of you, they gonna be calling me Electrician
I'm pretty sure this is in the same vein as the bar flip in your opener. extra effort makes it hit more but at this point we have seen this sort of thing enough


sorry @Unfukwitable noshowed you

Dug your wording though. Just stay away from played shit (I know thats a pain to hear cause I started about two years ago and spent the first one just hearing 'cool just dont do played flips'). solid drop though
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