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Old 04-18-2013, 04:56 PM   #14
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hard battle to vote on as I thought both did really well

zygote very vivid details in your whole verse, great verse I really enjoyed it. flow I felt choppy off and on throughout. not a huge point, but I just found it didn't flow as nicely as id have liked.

mike - this was a nice piece. as the others stated I felt the topic was tied into the last few lines only. However the flow to this whole piece was top notch man. excellent mechanics on this whole drop. major props for that

as far as vote I have to go with ...


zygote.

both came ill, but i had to pick one.
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