i loved this in the awol and i love it here, your very good at telling conversational stories that make a.reader not feel as if he/she is reading a 1,2,3..1,2,3 piece. you have a very natural flow to it. i respect the love you have for your wife man. this isnt the first love piece ive seen you write and mention her. im a sucker for love poetry which i know most people hate but ive had a few bad experiences in that area so i gravitate more towards that depressive emo type love poems lol. cant help it, thats just what comes out. anyways man ill try to come back to this sometime when im not on my phone and break down some faves and quotables. stay up bro. peace
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