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Old 04-18-2013, 04:29 PM   #2
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Mike Wrecka: I gotta be honest with you I really enjoyed your verse this week Mike. Terrific story of love between a husband of wife finding heaven here on earth. Your rhyming was impeccable as it is every week but the only bad thing I see about this is the piece is too short imo. I think with a longer piece you could have had a better chance of beating zy this week, as what you wrote was beautiful but wasn't enough.
I stand by that lol.
The emotion behind this piece is really what made it stand out to be honest. The rhyme scheme was simple but the words felt truthful which in turn made this piece powerful. One of my favorite drops from you man.
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