05-07-2015, 06:45 AM
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I liked the ending, but small parts of this seemed saccharine if not trite. Ambiance/ ambien/ ambulance comes to mind. Good characterization of the significant other for consumption by the reader.
You pronunciation of Gloucester makes me happy.
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Originally Posted by PancakeBrah
I'm going to start off on a tangent.
when I write, lately, I feel as if I begin by stringing together ambient ideas and concepts, then i realize I'm just typing the words coffee, tawdry, and autumn over and over and over, again, then I pass out dru-
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