Pummel your catfish text affair, i'm no joke man
Bullets runnin through a crew of curators, i killed spokesman
^concept was there fo sure. flip cuda been cleaner
Homos package all over the streets similar to FedExs strife
I make rash decisions, but none like your sex life
^eh, aite
A downward spiral of lows & now i'll bury this joker
Loser could never see hiesman as marcus mariota
^wp cool again. flip kinda basic imo. simple approach worked here tho. gd line
Cats look at his face, grab sand and try to bury it
Face is black & bloated enough to star in a Tyler Perry flick
^ehhh, ok
Ears the city of light & to you no one holds a candle
Ya not a powerhouse, cuz ya ears resemble a solar panel
^lol wat. ears resemble solar panels? wtf. this is kinda out there, so unless u're referencing a pic, it doesnt rly make sense to me. and i aint seen any pics and this wasnt a pic battle, so it doesnt rly hit for me
vs.
Washed up w/ nothing but pride tucked, fuck this lame cake,
I'm fucking facing a fag but it's nothin' since he does that every time he wakes.
^1st off, try to rhyme more than 1 syllable. concept was aite, but it's been done and the flip wasn't spectacular
Push circles larger than life that'll make ya weekend deepin',
U push circles to buy king kar while I give the high end buy treatment.
^buy king kar? i get the high end buy part, that's cool, but push circles to buy king kar makes no sense to me
Fuck his investments, my pump'll have his stock deflate from my quill,
If E*TRADE with the stock he'll need financial help to pay for da hospital bill.
^aite, decent. one letter np's are kinda lazy, but his name IS e, so its cool.
A gimmick and a joke u never let the tool spray or the hands sting,
Even just to shadow box we'd catch this cut doing hand gestures and figurines.
^this doesnt rhyme, sry. the idea is kinda cool tho. like the concept, but the execution was off
Fuck this cunt he the softest type, broads bullied him furious
Cus if E-Harmony he just look'n for who can relate to that expierence.
^aaaaaite, i guess. i see the concept. but this been done on him many times, probably. and the flip was kinda off.
well, e obv has a much better grasp on txt battling. his hits were better executed and had more impact. spoken had some cool and fresh ideas but needs to work on the execution. mb read some more battles to see how more experienced battlers do it. so yea. marcus mariota line won it for e. rash wasnt bad easier. spoken had e trade, but the rest still needed a bit of work. but yo if spoke sticks around and learns how to use his ideas effectively, he cud be gd. e just did enough to win i spose. seen better from him iirc.
v/e tha real
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