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Originally Posted by david stern razor burns
...The effort here was quite minimal, I'd say that my favorite aspect of the entire piece was surely the title as it probably had more thought put into it then any line of the verse itself.
The vocabulary was suspect indeed: "headphones" was your most complicated word which really is just two separate words unwillingly smashed together anyways so that barely counts.
As for the content, well it was so dreadfully unoriginal that it was almost groundbreaking in the fact that it nearly created its own brand new genre in futility, thus setting the bar at an all-time low previously never seen before. Too bad… you were thiiiiiiiis close to something special...
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Some of the funniest feed I've ever seen.
lol sorry YDK, but hilarious criticism there^.
Wasn't the worst thing ever, but may be close. i must agree that it's "unparallelled unoriginality". wow.. but, without even knowing you, i know that you're better than this, as are most 11 year olds. but i c that you are just practicing a flow. cool.